Saturday, April 16, 2011
My thoughts
It is raining, I am thinking of life again, thinking what could've been,what once was, now is, what once was so sweet, I just feel beat, just need a friend, just need a hand, just need someone to greet me hello how are you doing, you want some more, self loathing, self depreciating, actions that leave me with no sign of life, so I fight, to struggle to even get a glimpse of the light, but tonite, just me and my thoughts, we share a great bond, a life long, beautiful song that never ends, no regrets, just, just, me and my thoughts.
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2 comments:
I like these introspective pieces. :)
My twist on your piece.
It is hard to be surrounded by people
Yet feel all alone
I haven’t done what you have done
Who you have done
That way you said you did
And I don’t find it fun
To share, chat and gossip
So I close off
Without you realizing
And try not to feel like I’m missing out on something
That for me hasn’t come along
And know that while I feel all alone
I’m not the only one
It is amazing that so few words can spawn a thousand and more thoughts.
Goood job! I love it when you twist up my pieces!
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